You said “ask..!”
and I asked You for You
i feel your surprise
in the flash of the lightning
Your silence echoes
in the emptiness of the skies
i hear your mind ticking
in the sharp chirping of the birds
i feel Your hesitance
In the gusts of the breeze

so, now You know
what I, a mere mortal, feel.
it is not easy to give of oneself
give up oneself, give oneself.
it is not easy to surrender
to submit, to dissolve
in Love.

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4 thoughts on “

  1. I am working on placing your link to Jingle Poetry blog roll,
    I have been occupied by so many stuff, sorry for being late. it will appear within a week.
    your poetry rocks.
    keep it coming…

    write a poem related to 7 sins, link to our potluck today.
    Thanks for the support.

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